First person changes

I changed all the "we"s to "you"s, so it shouldn't be in 1st person anymore. Can someone check it and see if there is anything else that needs to be changed? Thanks!
PrincessFlowerTV (talk | contribs) 13:06, 18 March 2018 (UTC)

Actually, there shouldn't be any "you"s either - could you please change any second person to passive voice or "one"? Thanks.
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13:23, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
Ok- how does it look now?
PrincessFlowerTV (talk | contribs) 15:29, 19 March 2018 (UTC)