Potential concern

I haven't been on the wiki in a long time, so I'm not completely sure whether this is of concern or not.

However, it seems to me that this article is written in a way that *almost* violates S:NOSP - many of the users mentioned and the like feel too... personal (?) almost?

Like, for example, here, I am sort of bothered by "This was started by Zro716 and has spread slowly." It seems almost like it's addressing Zro716 as someone familiar to every reader. I personally think that it would be better worded as "This was started by the user Zro716 and has spread slowly" or something similar.

As I said, I haven't been on the wiki in a long time, so I'm not really sure what other people might think about this. That's why I'm curious to see others' opinions.
Userlogoaonymousguy.png AonymousGuy (talk | contribs | Scratch account) 03:49, 25 January 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I think of that as advertising Zro716.
Mitopolis (talk | contribs) 21:06, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
Yes, I definitely agree. It is making the assumption that everyone already knows about Zro716.
Srevilo (talk | contribs) 06:34, 24 March 2016 (UTC)